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CHAPTER 5
Writer brain. Hers switched on at the strangest times: while Leah Oglethorpe from English Lit was sobbing to her about her girlfriend ditching her for a grad assistant on the swim team, when faking an orgasm with Nick because she was high on K-4s and couldnโt get off, when Brady Vaughn overdosed in the admissions parking lot on the first day of school. It was during those tense situaยญtionsโno matter how humiliating, how crushing, how nerve wrackingยญโthat the aspiring novelist in her would switch on a lamp in some dusty office in the right hemiยญsphere of her brain and begin mining for literary gold.
Imagine if there was this girl maybe she had a minor opiate problem definitely not a criminal though but her boyfriend sells drugs and one day they go to buy pills and he leaves a pistol and dope in her car and this really mean police officer shows up . . .
She leaned against the back bumper of her car, foreยญarms flat on the trunk, staring through the rear window as he dug beneath the seats, lifted the floor mats, checked the door panels, the console, the glove compartยญment, the visors, all while whistling some arrogant little tune. Whisยญtling. As her life was circling the drain.
โFound your key,โ he called from the floorboard.
She considered running. But to where? And how far would she get? Even her writerly imagination could not concoct a scenario where she fled on foot and disappeared into the Pensacola underworld. She didnโt even know where the Pensacola underworld was located. And anyway, her money and credit cards were in her purse.
He stood and clapped the dust from his hands. โEveryยญthing appears to be in order . . . less you got a body in the trunk.โ
A glimmer of hope. โI can open it for you!โ Anything to get him out of her car.
โHang on darlinโ.โ He raised his palm. โI think I know how to pop a trunk.โ He glanced back inside the car and shook his head. โI hate going through a womanโs purse. Anything in there I should know about? Knives, needles, pipes?โ
She swallowed and forced a smile. โJust tampons and makeup and, um, my hairbrush.โ
He stared at it for a moment, chewing his lip, as if on the fence about such an invasion of her privacy. Then he ducked back inside the door, grabbed it from the console and dumped its contents onto the driver seat. Although she couldnโt see, she could hear it. A waterfall of friยญvolยญities and trinkets culminating in a distinct successive thโthunk.
Then silence followed by a low whistle.
She closed her eyes and clung to the stable steel of the Avalon as if her trembling legs were dangling from the side of a cliff.
While she had yet to begin her first novel, she did take copious notes in Professor Duncanโs creative writing class. Enough to grasp the mechanics of storytelling at a fundamental level. And enough to recognize that in the three-act structure of her life, she had just arrived at what the professor referred to as the first doorway of no return. The moment where everything changes.
Her hands were pulled behind her back with humiliยญating gentleness. Steel teeth nibbled at her wrists. When he spoke, his voice was solemn. His words floated over her shoulder in a gust of breath mints and aftershave.
โYou have the right to remain silent . . .โ

